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The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart draws the conclusion from a survey about the amount of people in two East Asian countries
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 and
China
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 from the year 2000 still now with predictions for the demographic boom to the year 2050. All things considered, In
China
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 and
India
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, it appears that their population trends will have increased by 2050 compared to the first investigations. In 2000,
India
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 had the fewest people around 1,000
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 and
China
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 had 1,200
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 individuals,
India
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 seems to have a significant rocket In the future without and decline and will howe reach a peak of 1,600
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. What is more, the proportion of ones will have happened nearly 1,400
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 population.
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,
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 has been remaining 25 years.
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, the third decade of research will show that population of the both countries will be equal in 2030.
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, the
last
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 decade of exploration indicates that
China
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's residents will have reduced slightly.
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