You're visiting a town where you once worked. Write to friend you worked with there. Include the following in your letter: Tell your friend about your life now Give him/her details of your visit Arrange how you can meet.
Dear Sir or Madam
Now I am living the life
i
want. It was not easy, but I did it. Now I live and work in my Change the capitalization
I
favorite
city, Italy. I like my Change the spelling
favourite
job
. My job
is to make toys for children. This
job
is very interesting because the laughter and joy of the children motivates
me. The salary of Change the verb form
motivate
this
job
is also
very good and the main thing is that I like it. I live in a rental now. I will have my own house soon. I have been waiting for this
day for a long time and it has come.
My parents live in Uzbekistan. I came to see them. This
city has changed a lot. More modern buildings were built here than before. Seeing my workplace, I remembered my friend
Mike
. I remembered the good and bad days we spent with him. We worked in a garment factory. Our job
was to sew clothes for children. The salary was not enough, but we would not give up.
There was a picture of my friend
Mike
on the old factory counter. I found out that my friend
Mike
bought this
factory. I wanted to meet my friend
Mike
. He had his number on the counter and i
texted to meet him and Change the capitalization
I
Mike
agreed. We had a heart to heart
conversation.
Yours faithfully,
AfruzaAdd a hyphen
heart-to-heart
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Task Achievement
You've told a fascinating story, but make sure to directly address the prompts given in the task. Specifically, elaborate more clearly on the details of your visit and how you plan to meet your friend. This will ensure a more complete response to the task.
Task Achievement
Try to use a clear structure in your letter. Start with a suitable greeting, such as 'Dear [Friend's Name],' rather than 'Dear Sir or Madam,' to make it more personal and appropriate for the context of writing to a friend. Conclude your letter with a more friendly closing, like 'Best wishes' or 'Looking forward to seeing you,' to enhance the overall tone and suitability.
Coherence & Cohesion
To improve coherence, consider organizing your ideas more logically. Group related ideas together and use paragraphs to separate them clearly. This helps the reader understand the flow of your thoughts and the connections between them.
Coherence & Cohesion
Although you mentioned your current life, the details of your visit, and a meeting arrangement, the transitions between topics can be smoother. Use linking words or phrases like 'Additionally,' 'Next,' or 'Furthermore,' to guide the reader through your story and improve coherence.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.
