Some argue that harmful
sports
should be restricted,
while
others argue that individuals should have
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freedom to choose.
While
others are
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about the risk of dangerous activities, I believe that people should have
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autonomy to choose the things they want to do.
To begin
with, harmful
sports
can have many
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in individuals. Participating
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dangerous activities can lead to fatal injuries and death. Even though they are physically and mentally prepared for it, the risk of
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high.
For instance
,
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continuous jarring of the head from boxing can lead to
injuries
such
as dementia, epilepsy, and
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. And these are lifetime injuries that cannot be cured. Banning
such
activity can protect
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from
harm
On the other hand
, others argue that a person should have
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right to choose the things they want to do even if these choices
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risks. Many participants engage in dangerous
sports
because it gives them a sense of accomplishment.
For instance
, those who participate in skydiving
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a sense of
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after they finish. They feel victorious because they were able to survive the activity that most people will not do.
Thus
, as long as the participant knows the potential dangers it can cause him, he should be allowed to do anything he wants.
In conclusion, engaging in harmful
sports
can have
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in the lives of individuals.
However
, I believe that everyone should make their own choices.