The given table shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005
The table demonstrates the partition of fuel consumption between Malaysia, Singapore, Thailand, South Korea and Japan. It is evident from the data that
a
nuclear Remove the article
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energy
was one of the most preferable for almost every country.
It is interesting to note that Malaysian energy
for
61% Change preposition
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generated
by Add a missing verb
was generated
a
coal and lignite, Correct article usage
apply
that
was the only country that Correct pronoun usage
which
relyed
Correct your spelling
relied
to
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on
the
one source of Correct article usage
apply
energy
for more than a
half. As Correct article usage
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a
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Malaysia
Singapore Replace the word
Malaysian
also
prefered
coal and lignite, Correct your spelling
preferred
however
they consumed Add the comma(s)
however,
for
approximately 20% less of the fuel and Change preposition
apply
also
used other types of resources.
Thailand is the only country that had no consumption of a
nuclear Remove the article
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energy
. However
, they also
remarkable by the fact of Add a missing verb
are also
a
petroleum products usage, because all other countries have small fractions of Correct article usage
apply
energy
that generated
by Add a missing verb
are generated
this
way. South Korea mostly generated
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generates
electicity
from Correct your spelling
electricity
a
renewable Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
energy
sources like a
nuclear or hydro and wind. Japan took the leading position in Correct article usage
apply
a
nuclear Remove the article
apply
energy
consumption, 49% of electicity
produced in 2005 was nuclear.Correct your spelling
electricity
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