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You should write at least 150 words. Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.

You should write at least 150 words. Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.
#chorleywood #village #london #population #middle #century #development
The map of Chorleywood displays the residential area close to London where the number of people
live
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 there has surged since the
mid late
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 18s.
Map
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 shows what changes have been made from 1868 to 1994 in the village. The place has been divided into 8 areas and
a
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one
 small land by 4 transportation ways. The area originally had only
one
 place located around the middle and it has been highly modernized since
then
. Nearly all areas around the roads
now
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 surrounded by some form of construction during the timezone. In total, Chorleywood has 4 roads, two roadways (
one
 horizontal and
one
 vertical),
one
 railway and a road for motor vehicles, vertical and horizontal, respectively. The north-east part of the village
left
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 undeveloped and
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 the years, nearly all the other parts of the village have been developed with different structures. A station which has the same name as the location itself and a railroad had been built during the late 18s and early 19s
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 before
expanded
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 with two new construction surrounding the station from the west and from the east between 1922 and 1970. After building a road for only motors in 1970, new constructions have been placed around it during the late
20st
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 century.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Steadily
  • Pivotal events
  • Significant change
  • Transportation links
  • Commuter village
  • Residential areas
  • Commercial areas
  • Public facilities
  • Infrastructure
  • Environmental impact
  • Community life
  • Conservation efforts
  • Maintaining character
  • Vicinity
  • Unique aspects
  • Common challenges
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