You should Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.

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The map of Chorleywood displays the residential area close to London where the number of people

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there has surged since the

mid late

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18s.

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shows what changes have been made from 1868 to 1994 in the village. The place has been divided into 8 areas and

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small land by 4 transportation ways. The area originally had only

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place located around the middle and it has been highly modernized since

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. Nearly all areas around the roads

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surrounded by some form of construction during the timezone. In total, Chorleywood has 4 roads, two roadways (

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horizontal and

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vertical),

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railway and a road for motor vehicles, vertical and horizontal, respectively. The north-east part of the village

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undeveloped and

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the years, nearly all the other parts of the village have been developed with different structures. A station which has the same name as the location itself and a railroad had been built during the late 18s and early 19s

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before

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with two new construction surrounding the station from the west and from the east between 1922 and 1970. After building a road for only motors in 1970, new constructions have been placed around it during the late

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century.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

207 words

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Steadily
Pivotal events
Significant change
Transportation links
Commuter village
Residential areas
Commercial areas
Public facilities
Infrastructure
Environmental impact
Community life
Conservation efforts
Maintaining character
Vicinity
Unique aspects
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You should Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village.

Children's education is expensive. In some countries, the government pays some or all of the costs. Do the edvantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage from using their cars?

As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.