The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The map presents how a
town
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named Stromer was in 1995 and how it is today. Dramatic changes took place in the Stromer, the
area
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now has more shopping places and residential buildings. Over the period, the
town
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has been completely transformed,
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dramatic structuring has
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changed the
town
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from a natural field to a modernised location. An education building was demolished at the
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of the
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and
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to the old one, five new shops opened the
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around it by chopping down the trees in that
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. Six new apartment buildings have been
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constructed
to the north and south sides of the shops. The
area
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used for farming has been reduced significantly and a new house has been built on it.
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, the forest located to the north-east part of the
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down partially, and a new airport and
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two of the new six apartments have been replaced by it. The
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now has less
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for plants and agriculture.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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