The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The map presents how a
town
named Stromer was in 1995 and how it is today.
Dramatic changes took place in the Stromer, the area
now has more shopping places and residential buildings. Over the period, the town
has been completely transformed, this
dramatic structuring has been
changed the Unnecessary verb
apply
town
from a natural field to a modernised location.
An education building was demolished at the center
of the Change the spelling
centre
town
and in addition
to the old one, five new shops opened the area
around it by chopping down the trees in that area
. Six new apartment buildings have been construted
to the north and south sides of the shops. The Correct your spelling
constructed
area
used for farming has been reduced significantly and a new house has been built on it.
Additionally
, the forest located to the north-east part of the town
cut
down partially, and a new airport and Add a missing verb
was cut
and
Remove the redundancy
apply
the
two of the new six apartments have been replaced by it. The Correct article usage
apply
town
now has less area
for plants and agriculture.Submitted by :DDDDD on
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