Mrs Barrette, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter •Suggest how you could help her in her home •say why you would like to do this work •explain when you will and will not be available Write at least 150 words
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Dear Mrs Barrette,
I am writing
this
email regarding the advertisement you gave in the the
newspaper, a few days before. I read the article carefullyRemove the redundancy
apply
,
and came to the conclusion that I would be a perfect match to help you to do your household chores. I will perform Remove the comma
apply
differents
tasks Correct your spelling
different
such
as cooking, laundary
Correct your spelling
laundry
as well as
cleaning of
your home. Change preposition
apply
This
would be a great help for you as you are going through a physical disability like broken
leg.
Add an article
a broken
Moreover
, I am a profeesional
in housekeeping and, having Correct your spelling
professional
an
experience of more than two years in Correct article usage
apply
this
filed
. I was Correct your spelling
field
keen
interested Change the word
keenly
to do
house stuff with my mother when I was young. Change preposition
in doing
Therefore
, I think I am made for this
kind of job and, wolud
like to join Correct your spelling
would
asap
possible.
Rephrase
as soon as
Last
but not least, I would like to share my schedule so we can arrange the
things Correct article usage
apply
accordingly
. I am available almost every day of the week except Sundays beacuse
that day I go out with my Correct your spelling
because
kith
and Correct your spelling
kin
kins
to enjoy outdoor activities like bowling and games.
I am looking forward to getting your response and, thank you Fix the agreement mistake
kin
to give
me your precious time.
Yours Change preposition
for giving
Sincerly
,
Talwinder Singh.Correct your spelling
Sincerely
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Grammar and Spelling
Ensure to proofread your letter for any grammatical or spelling mistakes to enhance clarity. For instance, 'email' should be 'letter', 'laundary' should be 'laundry', 'profeesional' should be 'professional', 'filed' should be 'field', 'keen interested' should be 'keenly interested', 'wolud' should be 'would', 'asap possible' should be 'as soon as possible', and 'kith and kins' should be 'kith and kin'.
Structure
Consider structuring your letter into clear paragraphs. For instance, introduce yourself and express interest in the role, explain your qualifications and why you're interested, outline your availability, and conclude with a polite closing statement.
Tone
Work on developing a more formal and polite tone throughout your letter. Phrases like 'I am made for this kind of job' can come across as too informal and self-assured for this context. Instead, express enthusiasm and willingness to contribute, using language that demonstrates respect and professionalism.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,