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the charts below show the proportions of british students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010

the charts below show the proportions of british students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010
#show #proportions #british #students #university #england #languages #addition #english
The pie charts
illustrates
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 the percentages of
the
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apply
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British
students
 in England who can speak more than one
language
another
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other
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 than English which are French only, German only, Spanish only,
Anther
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another
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language
, Two languages, and No other languages in 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that the proportion of
students
 who can not speak other
language
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languages
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 increased over 10 years.
However
,
students
 that can
use
 Spanish only decreased. According
from
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to
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 the charts French speakers slightly increased from 10% in 2000 to 15% in 2010. Meanwhile, German speakers
remain
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remained
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 the same in 2000 and after 10 years in 2010 still
not
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did not
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 rise from 2000 which is around
at
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apply
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10% throughout
past
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the past
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 10 years.
Furthermore
,
students
 who can
use
 Another
language
rise
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rose
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form
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from
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 30% in 2000 to almost 35% in 2010.
While
,
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students
 who can
use
 Two other languages
also
 rose slightly from 10% in 2000 to 15% in 2010.
Also
,
students
 who can not
use
 other
language
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languages
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 expect English
rise
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to rise
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 from 15% in 2000 to around 20% in 2010.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, language, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportions
  • British students
  • university
  • speaking other languages
  • language proficiency
  • overall trends
  • comparison
  • 2000
  • 2010
  • chart
  • data
  • percentage
  • significant
  • increase
  • decrease
  • noteworthy
  • comparative analysis
  • improvement
  • decline
  • conclusion
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