The diagram below shows how leather goods are manufactured.
The given infographic illustrates details about how leather products are manufactured.
Overall
, it can be seen that there are 11 steps involved in the process , commencing with drying animal skins
and culminating with used goods ready for distribution to wholesalers for consumption.
At the initial stage, the animal skins
are dried under the Sun before being moved into the factory.In this
factory , there are some chemical processes as these skins
are washed in water combined with lime ,and then
soaked in lime.
Subsequently
, the leathers are flattened by physical machines, prior to being soaked again in tannin. After that, these skins
are polished by wheels. Following
this
step is the delivering the leathers to the factory where they are used to produce a variety of completed products such
as shoes, handbags and balls. The process terminates when these new commodities are willing to be sold in the market to consumersSubmitted by Nghỉ hè vui vẻ cả nhà on
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