The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the
process
by which Use synonyms
bricks
are made for the building industry. Use synonyms
Overall
, there are seven steps in the Linking Words
process
, starting with the digging up of Use synonyms
clay
and culminating in delivery.
First of all, the Use synonyms
clay
which is made of Use synonyms
bricks
is dug up by a big digger. Use synonyms
This
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clay
is Use synonyms
then
placed into a metal grid Linking Words
that is
used to break the Linking Words
clay
into many small pieces by a roller. In the subsequent stage, sand and water are added to the Use synonyms
clay
. Use synonyms
This
mixture is placed into a mould as a wire cutter. After that, these Linking Words
bricks
are put in an oven to dry for 24-48 hours.
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Following
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this
, the Linking Words
bricks
go through some Use synonyms
process
. They are heated in a kiln at a moderate and high temperature. Use synonyms
Next,
the cooling Linking Words
process
happens in a chamber for 48-72 hours. Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
bricks
are packed and delivered to their destinations.Use synonyms
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