The table below shows the participation of people over 15 in selected sports and physical recreation activities by gender in Australia during peroid 2011-12.
The information about participation in physical
excercises
and selected games by men and women of Australia above 15 Correct your spelling
exercises
exercise
years
of age
during the period 2011-2012 is depicted by the given bar graph. The information is calibrated in the form of percentages.
Overall
, the most striking feature of the given chart is that females of
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between
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the age
age
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ages
between
25 Change preposition
of
years
to 64 years
are more interested in athletic games, while
males
of these age
groups are lagging motivation in staying fit. On the other hand
, 65 and over is the only age
group where men and women were competing in terms of fitness.
Taking a cursory glance, it can be clearly manifested that young males
between 15 to 24 years
old with percentage
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a percentage
52.8
% were Change preposition
of 52.8
excercising
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exercising
actively
than 25-34 Correct quantifier usage
more actively
years
old males
whose excercising
proportion was only 42.2%. Correct your spelling
exercising
Furthermore
, coincidently around 47.4% was the same figure for young and old females who showed equal interests
in sports Fix the agreement mistake
interest
whereas
men between 25 to 34 years
and 45 to 54 years
were also
equally interested in daily fitness with percentage
nearly equal to 42.7%.
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a percentage
further
details, 48.9% adult
females between 25-34 Change preposition
of adult
years
old were seen taking part in National sports. Apart from
this
, approximately 52.8% males
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of males
lying
between 35 Verb problem
apply
years
to 65 years
had shown remarkable
interest in physical fitness than their counterparts. Strikingly, a considerable difference of around 5.6 % can be noticed between Correct article usage
a remarkable
males
of 55-64 years
and 35-44 years
who were engaged in sports activities.Submitted by navkiranji on
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