You are going to another country to study. you would like to do a part-time job while you are studying , so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. write a letter to this friend. give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part time job suggest how your friend could help you to find a job
Dear Rahul,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you about my study in Canada that is
going to start in the following month. I have decided to get my further
education in Surrey and, I took a full-time computer course that would help me to reach my goal in the future. The course will last
for 2 years and, will provide me the opportunities to explore new things in this
particular field.
Furthermore
, I would appreciate it if you could find me part-time work with my studies. It will help me with my finances and, of course, will enhance my skills such
as work.
Moreover
, I will send my location where I will be staying so this
would be easy for you to find a job nearby. Additionally
, I will email my resume that you can distribute to the stores that are hiring right now.
I hope you will get in touch as soon as possible.
I am looking forward to getting your response and, thank you for giving me your precious time.
Your lovingly,
Talwinder Singh DhillonSubmitted by sandhuarsh1320 on
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Logical Structure
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Single Idea per Paragraph
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Complete Response
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