The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The Diagram illustrates
Proportion
of Correct article usage
the Proportion
Water
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at
Six Places in The Globe for Change preposition
in
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kind
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kinds
Usage
.
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Overall
, Agricultural Places Linking Words
takes
the first spot on Correct subject-verb agreement
take
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list
for most Add an article
the list
water
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Usage
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Axcept
One Place (Correct your spelling
Except
Euorpe
). Correct your spelling
Europe
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, Linking Words
Domestic
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the Domestic
Area
Is Use synonyms
Lowest
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the Lowest
in
the Change preposition
on
list
.
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list
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Uses
water
for their Use synonyms
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Agriculture
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agricultural
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Area Except
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areas except
One
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apply
Euorpe
.They Correct your spelling
Europe
use
more Use synonyms
Water
in Industrial Use synonyms
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area
rather than in Fix the agreement mistake
areas
agriculture
with the number of 53%in Industrial Use synonyms
use
and 32% in Use synonyms
Agriculture
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
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asia
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Asia
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for using more Use synonyms
water
in Use synonyms
Agricultural
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the Agricultural
area
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the
ratio of 88% in Correct article usage
a
Agriculture
and just 5% in Use synonyms
industrial
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an industrial
the industrial
area
which is the lowest ratio for Use synonyms
water
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in Correct your spelling
usage
industrial
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an industrial
the industrial
area
. Use synonyms
In addition
, Africa and Southasia Linking Words
Is
back Change the verb form
Are
in
the Change preposition
on
list
with Use synonyms
the
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apply
percentage
of 84% and 81% in Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
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agriculture
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agricultural
usage
and just 7% and Use synonyms
12%in
industrial Correct your spelling
12% in
use
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, North America is in Linking Words
second
spot for using most Change the article
the second
water
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area
with Fix the agreement mistake
areas
the
ratio Correct article usage
a
46
%.
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of 46
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apply
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usage
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Central
Asia and south Change preposition
in Central
east asia
with Correct your spelling
Southeast Asia
the
number of 7,7 Correct article usage
a
percentage
respectively.Replace the word
per cent
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