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The chart gives information about how much energy of different categories produced in France over the period of 5 years.

The chart gives information about how much energy of different categories produced in France over the period of 5 years.
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The pie charts illustrate the comparison of France's
energy
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production
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 in 1995 and 2005. Units are measured in per cent.
Overall
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, it can clearly be seen that gas and coal were the biggest
energy
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production
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 throughout the given period.
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, nuclear and other had little contribution. In terms of the biggest
energy
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production
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 contributors, gas and coal started at 29.63 and 29.80 respectively. In the following years, both of it were relatively remained stable.
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, in 1995, petro accounted for 29.27% before dropping significantly to around one-fifth in 2005. Regarding the smallest
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 contributors, nuclear made up 6.40 and others stood at just below 5.
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, they both witnessed a slight increase. Nuclear reached a peak of 10.10 and others hit it is highest level at 9.10.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, production with synonyms.
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