The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The given maps illustrate how Stromer
Town
hasbeen
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has been
changed from 1995 to nowadays.
Overall
, a comparison of the maps reveals that the
town
has totally transformed from undeveloped to a modern
town
.
Moreover
, the
town
is full of buildings nowadays with many accessible facilities. In terms of the
town
prior to the development, the areas of Stromer were still dominated by nature. More than half of the
town
was covered with
forest
.
In addition
, in the East-South of the
town
, there is a huge farmland. The
town
had one main road that divided the
town
itself and one shop that was located at the centre of the
town
.
Furthermore
, in 1995, there were only two houses that were founded in Stromer. Regarding the changes in the
town
, there have been many constructions in recent times. Now, the
town
has an airport which is located in the northeast of the
town
, replacing the
forest
that ever existed. Most of the
forest
area is replaced with many apartments and shops.
Moreover
, the
town
has a school in the centre surrounded by shops.
However
, the farmland and
forest
are still there in smaller size of areas.
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