You are visiting a town where you once worked. Write to a friend you worked with there. Include the following in your letter: •Tell your friend about your life now. •Give him/her details of your visit. •Arrange how you can meet.
Dear Sultan,
How is it going? Are you all right? I would to tell you that I am going to visit one
place
that we
been working there. I am really excited and happy to visit these Add the auxiliary verb
we have
place
again. These memories that we shared Fix the agreement mistake
places
both
will happen again.
Right Correct pronoun usage
apply
know
I am on vacation with my family. I tell them Correct your spelling
now
the
town that visited and enjoyed Change preposition
about the
with
the culture, the outstanding nature and the breathtaking view near the Eiffel Tower. Change preposition
apply
There
were shocked about my insist on going there. We quickly paid for the tickets to travel to Correct pronoun usage
They
the
Paris. I am looking for Correct article usage
apply
the
flat Correct article usage
a
where
is convenient and with the Eiffel Tower view. We will be there day to day.
Are Correct word choice
that
still
there? What day and time are you free? It is been a Correct pronoun usage
you still
while
not
Verb problem
since we have
seeing
each other. We can find Wrong verb form
seen
the
Correct article usage
a
place
where is
Correct pronoun usage
there is
not
flock of Correct your spelling
no
the
people with secluded Correct article usage
apply
place
. We can rent a table and have a cup of tea to chill. I hope that we will have a good conversation. See you soon.
Your friend BekaFix the agreement mistake
places
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure your letter follows a clear and logical structure. Your ideas should flow naturally from one paragraph to the next. Consider using transitional phrases to better connect your thoughts.
Coherence and Cohesion
Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single idea. This ensures clarity and coherence in your writing. For example, dedicate one paragraph to your current life, another to the details of your visit, and a third to arranging the meeting.
Task Achievement
Your task response is fairly complete. However, consider adding more specific details about your life now and the exact details of your visit (e.g., dates, plans) to make your letter more informative and personal.
Task Achievement
Maintain a suitable and consistent writing tone throughout your letter. Use phrases and language that reflect the informal and friendly nature of writing to a friend.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite