The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011
The table provides the percentage of people in five different
age
groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011. Overall
,the 0-9 age
group are the highest rode bicycles group whether female or male, while
the 40-59 age
groups are the lowest one.
In more detail, female
and Fix the agreement mistake
females
male
share almost the same percentage inFix the agreement mistake
males
0
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the 0
age
group, which is
accounted for 51.3 and 50.3, respectively.Unnecessary verb
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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