The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first line graph illustrates the of overseas
students
(Commencing and total) enrolments in Australian universities over the period of ten years from 2001 until 2010, Use synonyms
while
the second line graph illustrates the Linking Words
number
of local Use synonyms
students
enrollment. The units are measured in thousands of people.
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Overall
, for the overseas Linking Words
students
both commencing and total increased throughout the given period. Local Use synonyms
students
, Use synonyms
on the other hand
, had a very huge gap between the commencing and total Linking Words
number
of the Use synonyms
students
even though both of them increased as well.
The line graph of the overseas Use synonyms
students
indicates that there wasn’t a large gap in 2001 between the commencing and total, as the deference was only about 10,000. Use synonyms
While
, Linking Words
at the end
of 2010, the total Linking Words
number
became double the Use synonyms
number
of commencing Use synonyms
students
, which was around 80,000 Use synonyms
students
for the total and 40,000 for the commencing.
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On the other hand
, for the local Linking Words
students
numbers, there was a large gap from the beginning. It was less than 20,0000 commencing Use synonyms
students
and 40,0000 total. The total Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
students
increased significantly until it reached a constant amount of 60,0000 in the Use synonyms
last
four years, Linking Words
while
the commencing Linking Words
students
Use synonyms
number
was fluctuating throughout the period until it reach a slight increase Use synonyms
at the end
with a slightly more the 20,0000 Linking Words
students
.
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