The table below shows oil production figures in four Africans countries from 2000 to 2004, in barrels per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
chart shows the production of oil in four different countries. The litters are calculated for a day. Besides the
table Change preposition
The
is
summarised between 2000 to 2004 which is for 5 Unnecessary verb
apply
years
. Reportively
it is assumed that there Correct your spelling
Reportedly
are
inflation and deflation between the Correct subject-verb agreement
is
years
.
The first country is Nigeria. In 2000 the litters
measured Fix the agreement mistake
litter
is
205000 and in 2004 it Wrong verb form
was
is
reported as 213000. In the middle Wrong verb form
was
these
two Change preposition
of these
years
there are some increase
and Fix the agreement mistake
increases
decrease
. But it did not have any big difference.
Fix the agreement mistake
decreases
Second
country on the list is Chad. Surprisingly Change the article
The second
this
country did not produce oil for the three proceeding
Verb problem
preceding
years
and in the last
two
the yield was very low compared to the others. Which might cause loss.
The Fourth is Somalia. Add a comma
two,
This
place produced 5000, 8000, 17000, 21000, 50000 in the five years
. If taken into notice, it is clear that
the quantity has been incresed
every year. But among all the places Correct your spelling
increased
this
takes the second last
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