You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.
Dear Sir ,
I am writing
this
letter to ask you about a few electronic items if they are available at your store. I moved to my new house which is located at Hespeler Village and 400 meters away from your prestige store.
I specifically want Correct article usage
the whirlpool
whirlpool
brand because it is reliable and trustworthy and I want to order two items one is Capitalize word
Whirlpool
microwave
and the second one is Correct article usage
a microwave
food
processor , these things will save Add an article
a food
my
energy and time . It would be great if I will get them within four weeks or if these items are out of stock let me know if you are able to order them for me .
Correct pronoun usage
me
Moreover
, I want to know the price because currently my budget is too tight , if I can any
get Correct quantifier usage
apply
deal
with Correct article usage
a deal
discount
that would be amazing. Add an article
a discount
the discount
Due to
the budget constraint
I will not able to pick them up before a month.
Let me know if you have Add a comma
constraint,
capacity
to hold them Change the article
the capacity
at
least a month and I am looking forward to hearing from you .
Change preposition
for at
Correct the word
Yours
Your
faithfully,
JaiCorrect your spelling
Yours
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greeting and closing
Start your letter with a proper greeting, such as 'Dear [Name]' if you know the name of the person you are writing to, or 'Dear Sir/Madam' if you do not. End your letter with a more formal sign-off, such as 'Yours sincerely' if you know the name of the person, or 'Yours faithfully' if you do not, followed by your full name.
logical structure
Ensure that your letter is organized into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect of your request. For instance, separate paragraphs for the items you are interested in, their availability, pricing inquiries, and storage possibilities enhance the readability and structure of your letter.
complete response
To improve task achievement, make sure you address all parts of the prompt. Specifically, clarify how long you want the goods to be held for you and specify any preference or requirement for delivery options if applicable. Adjusting the tone to be slightly more formal can also contribute to a more appropriate response to the task.