the map below is of the town Galsdon. A new supermarket (s) is planned for the town. the map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. write at least 150 words.

the map below is of the town Galsdon. A new supermarket (s) is planned for the town. the map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. write at least 150 words.
The given map demonstrates the two proposed areas for a new supermarket in Garlsdon town.It is clear from the graph that , it is evident that the planned property (S1) is situated in the countryside, with both railways and main roads,
in contrast
to site 2 (S2) positioned in the middle of the town itself, with only a railway track going through it.
According to
what is shown, In terms of positioning and infrastructure, site S1 is represented by rural land outside the housing areas of the town of Garlsdon, with a main road leading to Hindon, which is in the northeast section of the map and 12 km away.
Also
,
this
site is blessed with an adjacent railway line spanning across Garlsdon.
To sum up
, we could say that, outside of the vehicle-restricted zone, there are houses and two industrial sections, which are connected to other neighbouring towns
such
as Hindon, Brasdon, and Arkonsal by three main roads.
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