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The given bar chart represents spending for five main fields in the USA, Canada, the UK, and Japan in 2009.

The given bar chart represents spending for five main fields in the USA, Canada, the UK, and Japan in 2009.
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The bar chart illustrates the percentage expenditure for five sectors in the USA,
Canada
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, United Kingdom, and Japan in 2009.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the consumption of housing in the USA was the largest amount of money,
while
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 clothing was the least proportion of spending in the United States.
To begin
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 with, more than a quarter of the costs were spent on housing, whilst the
transportation
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 field accounted for around 17% and
food
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 was calculated slightly below a 2% difference in the United States.
In addition
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, health care and clothing in the four countries were sized approximately under 10% of the expenditures.
However
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, in Japan,
food
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 was the highest proportion of spending with almost 23%,
whereas
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 housing reached a 1% gap under it and 10% for its
transportation
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 cost. Meanwhile, the money purchased for housing in
Canada
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 and the UK was dominated rather than another field, which accounted for 21% and 24% for each.
Then
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, it was a fifth for
Canada
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's
transportation
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 and
food
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 costs in the United Kingdom. There was
also
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 15% for purchasing
food
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 in
Canada
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 and
applied
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the same amount for
transportation
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 in the UK.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, transportation, food with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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