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The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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Contained in the bar
chart
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 is information pertaining to the number of two genders attending evening classes in an education centre for adults. The second pie
chart
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 illustrates the ages taking part in these courses
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, it can be seen that more females taking these courses with the exception of Sculpture where males attended more.
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, the 50 or over showed more participants than other groups and as the age got older, the participants got lower Regarding the first bar
chart
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, the number of females enrolled in Drama, Painting, and Language ranged from 20 to 40 persons,
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 the number of Men taking Drama was 10, 25 in Painting and 20 in Language. With respect to Sculpture, exactly 10 men enrolled in
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 course, double that of women. Turning to the pie
chart
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, the 50 or over gained more interest in evening classes with exactly 42%. With regards to the 20-29, 30-39 and 40-49 groups, the proportion of people participating was 11%, 16% and 26%, respectively. The groups of people aged under 20 show less interest in these courses with just 5% of attendants.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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