The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.
The various modes of transportation in Edmonton are depicted in the pie chart. The automobile emerges as the predominant mode of transportation, accommodating approximately half of the population (45%). LRT follows with a 35% share,
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The second table details the motivations of city dwellers who operate private vehicles. The primary cause is the commute to work, which affects more than half of the population (55 Fix the agreement mistake
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