The graph below shows the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from 1981-2007.

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of jam

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consumption

including

margarine

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, low fat & reduced spreads and butter in Asian countries from 1981 to 2007.

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, it can be seen that both

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and butter

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consumption

experienced some fluctuations

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low fat & reduced spreads passed

upward

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trend. Both of

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jams

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consumption decreased

at the

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of

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. Looking in more detail, butter consumption began at 140

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in 1981.

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, the

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significantly increased in 1986 and

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by a dramatic drop during five

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. From 1991 to 1996, there was a gradual fall for five

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.

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, the

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of consumption remained to

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steadily until the

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of time. In the meantime, the sum of

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stood at almost 100 grams

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1981. There was

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downward

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a downward

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trend for ten

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. After that, the

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unchanged to 100 grams from 1991 to 1996.

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comsumption

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consumption

gradually dropped

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2001 and

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by a steady decrease until the

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of

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time. Meanwhile, People did not consume

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& reduced spreads until 1996.

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year, the

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of

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& reduced spreads dramatically grew for five

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.

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, in 2001, there was a gradual fall until the

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of

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