The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the industrial
area
in the town of Norbiton and the future development after the plan.
Overall
, in the given diagrams, the Norbiton industrial
area
now looks empty, and the planned future development has huge changes.
According to
the maps, we can see that the Norbiton industrial
area
now has only a few factories. The planned future development has changed the factory to housing and built a lot of buildings,
for instance
, a playground on the north
side
, a school on the east
side
, shops on the west
side
, and a medical
center
Change the spelling
centre
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on the south
side
. There are
also
some new roads that have been developed connected to the playgrounds, the housing, and the school.
Furthermore
, there is a bridge above the river which separates the river into two parts. The farmland has
also
decreased to a smaller
area
and there is an extra circle road on the south
side
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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