The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams illustrate the different stages of the
silkworm
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during its life and the procedure of
silk
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cloth
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.
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, the life cycle of a
silkworm
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begins with the
silkworm
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laying
eggs
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and culminating in the cocoon which is used for
cloth
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production. The most logical point to start is a moth laying
eggs
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on a mulberry leaf, these
eggs
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transform into
larva
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larvae
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after being hatched for 10 days. The
silkworm
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larva eats mulberry leaves as the main nutrition for them and completes the second
stage
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of the life cycle in 4-6 weeks. The next step
after
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this
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is when the larvas create the
silk
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thread and turn it into a cocoon after a 3-to-8-day period. The cocoon
stage
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lasts for 16 days and they become moths in the final
stage
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and restart the cycle by laying
eggs
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. Moving onto the procedure of
silk
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cloth
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, the
silk
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thread shells taken from silkworms are selected and put in boiling water.
After
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this
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step is complete, they are unwinded and the thread is 300-to-900 meters long. The next
stage
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is when these shells are twisted
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dyed or after being weaved. The whole process terminates when the
silk
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cloth
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has been dyed and is ready to be shipped.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "after this".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words silkworm, silk, cloth, eggs, stage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Silkworm
  • Larva
  • Cocoon
  • Moth
  • Mulberry leaves
  • Caterpillar
  • Pupa stage
  • Silk thread
  • Cycle
  • Harvested cocoons
  • Boiled
  • Unwound
  • Spun
  • Woven
  • Dyeing
  • Silk cloth production
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