The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams illustrate the different stages of the
silkworm
during its life and the procedure of silk
cloth
. Overall
, the life cycle of a silkworm
begins with the silkworm
laying eggs
and culminating in the cocoon which is used for cloth
production.
The most logical point to start is a moth laying eggs
on a mulberry leaf, these eggs
transform into larva
after being hatched for 10 days. The Fix the agreement mistake
larvae
silkworm
larva eats mulberry leaves as the main nutrition for them and completes the second stage
of the life cycle in 4-6 weeks. The next step after
this
is when the larvas create the silk
thread and turn it into a cocoon after a 3-to-8-day period. The cocoon stage
lasts for 16 days and they become moths in the final stage
and restart the cycle by laying eggs
.
Moving onto the procedure of silk
cloth
, the silk
thread shells taken from silkworms are selected and put in boiling water. After
this
step is complete, they are unwinded and the thread is 300-to-900 meters long. The next stage
is when these shells are twisted then
dyed or after being weaved. The whole process terminates when the silk
cloth
has been dyed and is ready to be shipped.Submitted by Nghỉ hè vui vẻ cả nhà on
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