The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting qnd reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given maps provide

an information

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information

a piece of information

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about

island

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the island

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, before and after the renovation of some tourist facilities. Generally, the island is surrounded by sea north and south.

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, even though the buildings have been constructed, the trees

did

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were

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not damaged or harmed.

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with, a lot of construction

have

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has

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been built,

such

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as a restaurant, a

reception

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, a bunch of accommodation, etc.

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, the facilities are located in the west of the island.

The

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centre of the

constructions

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construction

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the

reception

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is being seen and it is surrounded by a

ring-road

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ring road

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. The west and the east sides of the

reception

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have

plethora

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a plethora

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of accommodations which

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apply

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the tourist temporarily resides.

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, the accommodations are in

shape

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the shape

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circle

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a circle

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and there

are

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a footpath which connects with each other.

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, north of the

reception

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has

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the restaurant which

also

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has a vehicle track that

wired

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is wired

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with the

ring-road

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ring road

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, the outside of the land has

the

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pier

that is

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also

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located in the south.

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the

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apply

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next to the pier some boats are shown.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.

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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words reception with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

173 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

tourist facilities
natural landmarks
recreational facilities
infrastructure
environmental degradation
economic benefits
landscape
aesthetic
accommodations
sustainability
construction
development
before and after
transformation
conservation
impact
utilitarian
tourism industry

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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting qnd reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Many young people do not spend their holidays and weekends doing outdoor activities like hiking and climbing in natural environments. Why is this the case? How can they be encouraged to go out?

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Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each orther. Others argue that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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"Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up." To what extent do you agree or disagree?