The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting qnd reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given maps provide

an information

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information

a piece of information

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about

island

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the island

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, before and after the renovation of some tourist facilities. Generally, the island is surrounded by sea north and south.

Also

, even though the buildings have been constructed, the trees

did

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were

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not damaged or harmed.

To begin

with, a lot of construction

have

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has

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been built,

such

as a restaurant, a

reception

, a bunch of accommodation, etc.

Overall

, the facilities are located in the west of the island.

The

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In the

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centre of the

constructions

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construction

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the

reception

is being seen and it is surrounded by a

ring-road

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ring road

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. The west and the east sides of the

reception

have

plethora

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a plethora

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of accommodations which

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apply

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the tourist temporarily resides.

Moreover

, the accommodations are in

shape

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the shape

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circle

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a circle

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and there

are

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a footpath which connects with each other.

Also

, north of the

reception

has

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the restaurant which

also

has a vehicle track that

wired

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is wired

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with the

ring-road

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ring road

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Therefore

, the outside of the land has

the

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pier

that is

also

located in the south.

Also

the

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apply

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next to the pier some boats are shown.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words reception with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

173 words

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Topic Vocabulary:

tourist facilities
natural landmarks
recreational facilities
infrastructure
environmental degradation
economic benefits
landscape
aesthetic
accommodations
sustainability
construction
development
before and after
transformation
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