There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter

Dear
sir
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or Madam, I would like to complain in
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term
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about the problems with the bus service over the
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two weeks. I am a regular client of your company and every morning picks the relevant bus to travel to my office. But
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about
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a
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one or two weeks
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i
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feel
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there is something wrong with
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the bus
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bus
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service ,
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its reliability. First of
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i
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would say that the bust did not
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in time and because of
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late to
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my office and
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bad
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effect on my career. The other
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which
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want to
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is that the
buses
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condition is not good they need tuning and some cleanness
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. I would request you
with
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humble
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please take
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proper notice of these problems and take proper initiative to resolve these issues. I would be most grateful
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u could reply as soon as possible so that the matter can be resolved to
everyone
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satisfaction. I
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forward to hearing
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you. Yours Faithfully,
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Task Achievement
Begin by clearly stating your purpose for writing within the first paragraph to establish context for the reader.
Task Achievement
Use a variety of sentence structures and vocabulary to demonstrate language fluency and to keep the reader engaged.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure paragraphs are well-structured around a single idea for clarity and flow. Each paragraph should begin with a clear topic sentence.
Coherence and Cohesion
Organize your thoughts logically, starting with an introduction, followed by the body paragraphs each addressing a specific issue, and concluding with a polite request for action and a closing statement.
Overall Advice
Proofread your letter to correct grammatical errors and to ensure clear and concise communication. Errors can distract from the message you are trying to convey.
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Consider varying your sentence openings and using transitional phrases to improve the letter's readability and flow.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adhering to schedules
  • inconvenience
  • daily routine
  • punctuality
  • frequency during peak hours
  • overcrowding
  • commuters
  • update system
  • reliable
  • maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • irregular bus timings
  • passengers
  • delays
  • unreliable
  • appointments
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