There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
Dear
sir
or Madam,
I would like to complain in Capitalize word
Sir
strongest
Add an article
the strongest
term
about the problems with the bus service over the Fix the agreement mistake
terms
last
two weeks. I am a regular client of your company and every morning picks the relevant bus to travel to my office. But Change preposition
for about
about
Change preposition
for about
Correct article usage
apply
a
one or two weeks Correct article usage
apply
Capitalize word
I
i
Capitalize word
I
feel
there is something wrong with Wrong verb form
felt
Correct article usage
the bus
bus
service , Correct article usage
the bus
Specially
its reliability.
First ofRephrase
Especially
Correct pronoun usage
all i
i
would say that the bust did not Change the capitalization
I
arrived
in time and because of Change the verb form
arrive
this
I, often
late to Add a missing verb
was often
reach
my office and Wrong verb form
reaching
this
also
put
Verb problem
had
bad
effect on my career. The other Add an article
a bad
thins
which Correct your spelling
thing
i
want to Change the capitalization
I
described
is that the Change the form of the verb
describe
buses
condition is not good they need tuning and some cleanness Change noun form
bus's
also
.
I would request you with
Change preposition
apply
humble
please take Change the word
humbly
a
proper notice of these problems and take proper initiative to resolve these issues. I would be most grateful Remove the article
apply
is
u could reply as soon as possible so that the matter can be resolved to Correct your spelling
if
everyone
satisfaction.
I Change noun form
everyone's
looked
forward to hearing Wrong verb form
look
of
you.
Yours Faithfully,Change preposition
from
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Task Achievement
Begin by clearly stating your purpose for writing within the first paragraph to establish context for the reader.
Task Achievement
Use a variety of sentence structures and vocabulary to demonstrate language fluency and to keep the reader engaged.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure paragraphs are well-structured around a single idea for clarity and flow. Each paragraph should begin with a clear topic sentence.
Coherence and Cohesion
Organize your thoughts logically, starting with an introduction, followed by the body paragraphs each addressing a specific issue, and concluding with a polite request for action and a closing statement.
Overall Advice
Proofread your letter to correct grammatical errors and to ensure clear and concise communication. Errors can distract from the message you are trying to convey.
Overall Advice
Consider varying your sentence openings and using transitional phrases to improve the letter's readability and flow.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
