Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now "one big traffic jam" How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage p

In
modern
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the modern
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era ,
usage
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the usage
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of
car
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cars
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has skyrocketed.
People
having
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a car
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car
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has increased drastically in the span of thirty years and it
lead
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has led
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to
a
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problem of big
traffic
jams in numerous
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metro
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cities all over the world. If questioned, I think it is true to a large extent. My position is
further
elaborated in the upcoming paragraphs with valid examples and
explainations
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explanations
as well as
some precautions that the authorities can take to
dismotivate
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demotivate
individuals from driving their own
cars
. Discussing the
truthness
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of the statement, the first
arguement
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argument
regarding
this
is that
nowdays
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pollution
had
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has
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increased. By having numerous
car
pollution
like air
pollution
and
noise
pollution
had
rose
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as
car
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the car
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uses fuel which
lead
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to
pollute
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the air and the loud
noise
from the hones lead to
noise
pollution
.
Besides
this
, there is
also
rise
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in accidents.
For instance
, the increase
of
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cars
lead
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leads
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to major
traffic
jams in cities or outside of it and many accidents are caused
due to
it .
Hence
, these arguments
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that there is an increase in
number
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a number
the number
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of
cars
.
However
, the government can take some actions against
people
to make
they
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sure they
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don't use
cars
more often .
To begin
with , they should strictly implement some rules and regulations regarding
cars
.
Such
as if anyone is found to be breaking the
traffic
rules
as well as
using
cars
so much ,
then
a heavy penalty should be fine .
Further
, the authorities should raise awareness of using public transport by making public
transports
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transport
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such
as buses and trains more frequent and
rise
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increasing
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their numbers. In
this
way , the government can discourage folks from using their
cars
.
To sum up
, it is true that the number of
cars
have
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rose
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risen
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significantly in the
last
thirty years and
this
cause
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has caused
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major
traffic
jams in many towns all over the world. It is clearly seen by the increase in air and
noise
pollution
as well as
rise
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the rise
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in more frequent accidents that many
people
have
cars
.
Hence
, the government should implement strict rules
such
as
penalty
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the penalty
a penalty
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for too much use of
cars
and raise awareness of using public
transports
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transport
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will make
people
to
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use their
car
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cars
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less.
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