The diagram below shows the life cycle of a flower and the various stages

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a flower and the various stages
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the life cycle of a flower and the various stages
Contained in the illustration is information pertaining to the development of a flower reported as a life cycle.
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, the process involves eight cyclical stages, commencing with
seeds
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being planted, turning into a sprout and culminating with fruits generated on the plants.
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, having completed
alll
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all
these steps, the lifecycle will
then
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begin again. The most logical point to start at is the
seeds
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planted and watered by hand.
The next step is
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when the
seeds
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germinate, forming their roots at the bottom,
subsquently
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Subsequently
, they grow up into sprouts with
a longer roots
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longer roots
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and higher
body
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bodies
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above the ground level. Over the course of approximately seven days, they turn into the seedlings which have some leaves and
ready
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for the next steps. Once the buds have been formed on the top of the plants' bodies, they bloom into flowers and
then
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fruit. After that, the fruits are naturally discomposed and leave the
seeds
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on the ground. The whole process begins again when people collect those
seeds
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and plant them back to
ground
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the ground
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.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words seeds with synonyms.
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