You are a final year student of basel univaersity, studying MBA. You want to appliy for the post of quality assurance manager you have recently seen on the university's notice bord. write a letter to the HOD, give your reason for writing tell about yor education describe your work experience and explain why you would be sutaibel for the job
#year #student #basel #univaersity #mba #appliy #post #quality #assurance #manager #university #notice #bord #hod #reason #yor #education #work #sutaibel #job
Dear Sir / Madam
I am writing
this
letter to bring your attention that I want to apply for the post of quality assurance manager which I have seen on the university's notice Correct your spelling
board
bord
Correct your spelling
board
moverover
I feel that I am the Correct your spelling
moreover
sutaibe
for Correct your spelling
suitable
this
job post
My name is Ron Rony, I have completed my graduation in Pharmacy and now I am final
year student of Correct article usage
a final
basel
Change the capitalization
Basel
univerity
studying MBA. I Correct your spelling
University
haver
worked on Correct your spelling
have
lot
of Change the article
a lot
resuerch
Correct your spelling
research
project
likeFix the agreement mistake
projects
,
artificial blood production which is undergoing process Remove the comma
apply
In addition
to that i
am going to apply for petent. In my degree Change the capitalization
I
course
I was the toper of my university.
I have more Add a comma
course,
intreset
in research, I would love to do Correct your spelling
interest
job
as a Correct article usage
a job
quaility
assurance manager and my skills and knowledge allined with Correct your spelling
quality
this
filed
. kindly give me Correct your spelling
field
opportunity
to Add an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
proof
myself as well Replace the word
prove
let
me know the Correct word choice
as let
registation
details. I have
attached my resume for your reference,
Look forward to hearing from you,
Thank you
Yours faithfully,
Ron Rony.Correct your spelling
registration
Submitted by akankshayhedaoo10 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
task achievement
Ensure that the introduction paragraph clearly outlines the purpose of the letter and why you are writing. Avoid vague statements such as 'I feel that I am the suitable for this job post' and be more specific about your intentions.
coherence cohesion
Your letter would greatly benefit from proofreading. There are numerous spelling and grammatical errors that need correction ('univerity' should be 'university', 'haver' should be 'have', 'petent' should be 'patent', 'allined' should be 'aligned').
coherence cohesion
Follow a clear structure: introduce yourself and state your purpose in the first paragraph, detail your education and work experience in the middle paragraphs, and conclude with a request for further information or a chance to discuss your application, along with a polite closing.
coherence cohesion
Consider using paragraph breaks to separate ideas. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea or theme - for example, one paragraph for your intention to apply, another for your education, a third for your work experience, and finally a conclusion.
task achievement
To convey a suitable writing tone, use formal language and avoid contractions ('I have' instead of 'I haver', 'I am interested' instead of 'I have more intreset'). Maintain a consistent level of professionalism throughout the letter.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.