Smoking is not only harm to smoker but also those who are near by.Therefore smoking should banned in public places. To what extend do you agree or disagree

Smoking is a topic of debate in all the countries because

smokers

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has been increasing day by day . Some people think that smoking

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cause

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causes

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detrimental effects on the

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health and the higher authorities should

taken

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appropriate action in order to save the lives of people

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, other masses have different opinions. I believe that smoking should be banned in public areas for the welfare of

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individuals .

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with , cigarettes

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made up of harmful and deadly materials which

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failure

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the failure

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of

lungs

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the lungs

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when someone

use

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uses

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it

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for a long time .

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, the smoke can

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cancer and bronchitis , in

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situation

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patients have very less chances of survival.

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, active smokers are very dangerous because they create passive smokers .

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, as per the

survey

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the smoke goes inside the body through the breathing from the air and a normal person

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becomes

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a passive smoker without knowing it

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, indirectly it

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cause

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causes

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disaster to their health. In many restaurants, shopping malls and public places it is banned by the government

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the individuals caught by the police

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are sent

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to

the

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jail or they have to pay

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a penalty

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. All

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individuals are allowed to smoke

at

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in

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their homes

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way , they cannot harm any innocent person .

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, smoking is

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a source of air and soil pollution which contaminates the environment.

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, a smoker throws the residual of the cigarette on the roads and it

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increased

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increases

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the content of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere.

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,

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is a deadly activity ,

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and those

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who

wants

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to get rid

from

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of

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this

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habit should go the

the

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rebah

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centres which are constructed by the governments .

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is

a

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responsibility of the local citizens not to create inconvenience for

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others and

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them live their lives comfortably.