Your neighbours have revently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat. Write a letter to you neighbours. In your letter: -explain the reason for the noise. -apologise for the noise. -describe what action you will take.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in
regards
to the complaint I have received from you recently. My sincere sorry for the problem reason to my movements. Fix the agreement mistake
regard
Such
as, I am assuring you that I will be more careful and outgoing in the future.
I started learn
the piano status quo. Fix the infinitive
to learn
Likewise
, as you may know, I am working more time and like free time. I am able to dedicate to
my classes is weekends. Correct pronoun usage
myself to
Hemceforth
, I have Correct your spelling
Hence
been
hired a piano tutor to instruct me during weekends Unnecessary verb
apply
like
I Correct word choice
apply
am
Change the verb form
apologise
apologise
Add the preposition
apologise for
this
the noise reaching your flat.
I am sorry about inconvenience
. I am caused to you and Mrs Williams. I Add an article
the inconvenience
do
not expect the sound of my new piano has Wrong verb form
did
been
so loud and reach your beautiful rooms. Wrong verb form
be
Such
as, I understand your position like
request you to my sincere apologies.
Correct word choice
and
Consequently
, I have decided like
I will continue my new instrument class Correct word choice
that
my
teacher's home Change preposition
at my
instead
of mine. Likewise
, this
way very
good and I would be able to Add a missing verb
is very
the
continue my practice and Correct article usage
apply
it
not disrupt you. I am very famous in the future. I am singing different songs. I hope you Correct pronoun usage
apply
forgery
Correct your spelling
forgive
Correct pronoun usage
me
my
Correct pronoun usage
me
Change preposition
for this
this
work.
Yours sincerely,
Khusan EsomurodovChange preposition
for this
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Task Achievement
Start by clearly outlining the purpose of your letter in the introduction. Your letter should begin with a direct response to the neighbours' complaint before explaining your reasons.
Task Achievement
Improve clarity by directly addressing each point listed in the prompt: explain the reason for the noise, apologize sincerely, and describe the specific actions you will take to mitigate the noise.
Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea: one for the explanation, one for the apology, and one for the proposed action. This helps in maintaining logical flow and structure.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use a proper greeting and closing to maintain a suitable tone. For instance, 'Dear Neighbours,' at the beginning and 'Kind regards, [Your Name]' at the end can enhance the readability and formality.
Coherence & Cohesion
Check for grammatical errors and sentence structures that may confuse the reader. Aim for clear, concise sentences that clearly convey your point without ambiguity.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite