Professional sports person are often idolized by the youth. Some people think that they, therefore, have a responsibility to be role models at all times for children. Do you agree or disagree?

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data from my survey
support
my
hypothesis
. My
study
explores how using a mobile
phone
during multitasking activities,
such
as browsing social media or listening to music, affects
reaction
time
.
However
, when people
use
their phones, they cannot
focus
on other things, and their
reaction
time
will be lower.
Phone
influence
affects people's
reaction
time
.
This
study
by Pavelka (2019) showed that the team that passed the test with a
phone
had a lower score than the team that did not
use
a
phone
during the test. It showed that social media can go down in
reaction
time
. Another
study
was educational, with my results
and
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support
my
hypothesis
from Monke (2012)
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that when you
use
a device, it can
influence
reaction
time
. His experiment proved that using a
phone
affects
reaction
time
.
Students
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reaction
time
was faster when they did not
use
their phones because when they used devices, they were distracted and could not
focus
on their work. His experiment showed that if participants speak with somebody and are trying to listen to their partner. He cannot
focus
on driving, and his
reaction
time
will be lower. As far as the
important
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of the
phone
lowers the
reaction
time
Pavelka (2019) and Monke (2012) have corresponding views. Žuraulis et al (2018) have examined how the driver will feel if he loses control of the vehicle with the
phone
. Drivers will not
focus
on the road fully, and mental strain will increase too. Driver
reaction
time
increased by 18.1
percent
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compared to drivers without devices.
Also
, these data
support
my
hypothesis
. Monke. (2012) and Žuraulis et al (2018) take a similar position with regard to the slower driver
reaction
time
when using a
phone
while
driving. Grewal and Sahni (2019) claimed that older people (60-70 age) who used their smartphones too much had the fastest
reaction
time
.
According to
science, video games and smartphones can develop cognitive skills and motor functions. Sciences came to the conclusion that to stop cognitive problems and disabilities, it is recommended to play video games and
use
devices; it helps stop neurological problems and disabilities. They directly affect the human brain.
However
, Grewal and
Sahni
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(2019) source of information does not
support
my
hypothesis
. Jage, et al. (2020)
this
academic work,
give
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an idea
of
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children
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reaction
time
will decrease. if they
use
device
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. It
is
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influence
by
cognitive
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the cognitive
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development of
children
(aged 6-12) .In the future , it can
influence
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by deterioration of attention and memory, poor sleep, loss of learning and cognitive skills and more irritability. Authors recommend
reduce
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phone
use
by
children
(aged 6-12). The
study
Poujol
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by Poujol
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et al (2022) illustrates
when
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phones do not
influence
on
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the intelligence or memory of teenagers but if
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will
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use
phone
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too much his cognitive
skill
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will grow
down
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.
However
, similar views regarding the deterioration of cognitive abilities in
children
adhere to
the
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Poujol et al (2022) and Jage, Sharma and Kumar (2020) . Poujol et al (2022) and Jage, Sharma and Kumar (2020)
also
support
my
hypothesis
.Sunday , Adesope and
Maarhuis
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(2021) research shows that
phone
has
bad
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influence
on
study
.Results of
this
study
shows
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that students
use
phone
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phones
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many times ,academic performance declines and dependence appears.My work
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at
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Reducing
phone
usage will have a good effect on learning. Sunday , Adesope and Maarhuis (2021
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