The charts show the distribution of the world’s water and use of water in three countries.

The charts show the distribution of the world’s water and use of water in three countries.
The pie charts compare the share of how
water
is distributed throughout the world,
whereas
the
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bar one illustrates the proportion of
water
consumption in three countries, namely Egypt, Saudi Arabia, and Canada.
Overall
, what stands out from the diagrams is that a small amount of
water
is fresh, and it is mostly found in ice and glaciers.
Besides
,
water
is mainly used for agricultural purposes in Egypt and Saudi Arabia,
while
in Canada, the main aim for
water
use is the industry. With regard to the first graphs,
it is clear that
salt
water
makes up 97% of the total,
while
the fresh one ranks
last
with merely 3% of the gross.
Additionally
, fresh
water
is mostly available in ice and glaciers and on the ground, whilst the former accounts for approximately 80%, the latter is lower by a margin of 60%. The remaining 1% of fresh
water
is on the surface. Shifting the focus to the second one, it is evident that more than 75% of
water
is consumed in the agricultural fields in Egypt and Saudi Arabia,
whereas
that
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Canada is responsible for slightly less than 10%. Figures for the domestic and industry sectors follow nearly similar patterns, as those in all three countries are responsible for less than roughly 15%.
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