The graph below shows changes in young adult unemployment rates in England between 1993 and 2012.
The line graph provides information about the
number
of unemployed young people in England
from the year 1993 to 2012.
Overall
, the percentage of jobless people has increased over time. On the other hand
, the proportion of the unemployment rate in London
and the rest
of England
decreased at the end
of the period.
The number
of unemployed residents aged 16-24 in London
was significantly higher than the same age bracket in the rest
of England
. In 1993, there were around 23% unemployed adolescents in London
, while
there were only 17% in England
. In London
, this
rate dropped until 1999 to under 15%, the lowest in the period. However
, in 2004 it rose again to 18%, and reached 25% in 2012, the highest unemployment rate in London
. The number
of jobless people in the rest
of England
dropped by 2004 by approximately 12% and it increased in the following years reaching its peak in 2012 at 20%.
The overall
ratio of jobless citizens in London
and England
went down over the period. In London
, there were around 14% in the beginning, while
there were only 10% in the rest
of England
. Both ratios dropped until 2005 and from then
on the number
fluctuated reaching 9% in London
in 2012, whilst it reached 7% for the rest
of England
at the end
of the year.Submitted by yoko.onerom on
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