The tables below give information about sales of Fairtade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summsrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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tables illustrated information about both bananas and coffee Correct your spelling
separated
separate
commerses
of Correct your spelling
commerces
commerce
Fairtade
- labelled in five countries of European in 1999 and 2004.
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Fairtrade
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, in 2004, purchase
of Correct article usage
the purchase
banana
was the highest Fix the agreement mistake
bananas
million
which was 47 euro million
in Switzerland from other
4 countries. Correct article usage
the other
Controversly
, the lowest sale was Correct your spelling
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banana
of Belguim
in 1999 which was only 0,6 Correct your spelling
Belgium
million
.
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commerse
was greater Correct your spelling
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by
million
than Sweden
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Sweden's
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UK's
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2004.
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sales
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commerce
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banana
which was 47 euro Fix the agreement mistake
bananas
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