The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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illustrates
sales
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and bananas between 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. In the first table, it described
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coffee
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euros
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, within 5 years, sales
of coffee
were
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UK
by 18.5 Correct article usage
the UK
millions
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euros
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merely
some Change preposition
by merely
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in other countries which were Switzerland by 3 euros
and 0.7 euros
of these coffee
sales
sold in Belguim
respectively. Correct your spelling
Belgium
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, in
Sweden and Change preposition
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in
Denmark had Change preposition
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same increases which were 1.8 to 2 and 0.8 to 1.
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, in bananas sales
in Sweden and in Denmark, there are tendency of
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Secondly
, UK
had the highest increase among all countries and Correct article usage
the UK
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, Switzerland and Belguim
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bananas
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