The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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' destination from a university and the table shows how much

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these

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earn after participating in work 5 years later. More than half of the graduate students chose to take part in full-time work with the

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a marked 52%.

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, the percentages of

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who worked as part-time workers and who were unemployed are

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15% and 12% respectively. There are

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chose

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to learn

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study, with the

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for

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attending full-time postgrad study is 8%

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equally to the

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for Anthropology students whose destinations are not known.

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, 5% of students did part-time

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and

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postgraduate

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study

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coincidently. As for those

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working for 5 years, there are evident differences between their salaries. People who work as freelance consultants are more likely to earn higher salaries with 80% of them

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able to earn more than $75,000.

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there is

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same result of

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calculation

in people who can earn more than $75,000, the

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for people who earn $100,000+ working in

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sector

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to be bigger (50%). Private company owners have dramatic differences between the income level, as 35% and 30% of them earn $50,000-74,999 and more than %100,000 respectively

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25% and 10% of them only earn %75,000-99,999 and $25,000 to 49,999 respectively.

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, plenty

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for the

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and most of them are able to earn a living after working in different types of employment for 5 years.