You have reccently moved to another city but your bank has your old address and continues to send all the communication there. Write a letter to your bank Branch. In this letter mention: -Where you have moved? -What problem are you facing regarding the bank's communication? -What do you want them to do regarding old communication already sent to the wrong address.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you about
bank
branch ,so the bank sent to my old Correct article usage
the bank
address
continues all the informations
Change the wording
information
pieces of information
however
, I already moved another
country.
I moved Change preposition
to another
Change preposition
to korea
korea
Change the capitalization
Korea
in
Seul, it was my dream city and, I Change preposition
to
enter
Wrong verb form
entered
to
Change preposition
apply
yonsein
university located in Seul. Correct your spelling
yonsei
Cause
I was moved.
There are Correct word choice
Because
have
Unnecessary verb
apply
a
many Correct article usage
apply
of
banks but, they say Change preposition
apply
my
all Correct pronoun usage
apply
communication
Correct pronoun usage
my communication
sent
old Add a missing verb
is sent
address
. As well as
, I can not Rephrase
Also
sent
Change the verb form
send
be sent
communication
it is problem
.
I want them to do regarding old Correct article usage
a problem
communication
for deleted it and I can I
open Correct pronoun usage
apply
new
Correct article usage
a new
address
and I will have new
Add an article
a new
address
in Seul. Also
my home Add a comma
Also,
located
near Add a missing verb
is located
the
Correct article usage
apply
yonsein university
. And Correct your spelling
Yonsein University
i
am Change the capitalization
I
student
. There are my Add an article
a student
address
is new and I won't my
old Add a missing verb
have my
address
sent to communication
. And the
communications return meCorrect word choice
The
,
because it is valuable Remove the comma
apply
me
especially Change preposition
to me
it
Correct word choice
if it
is
will be my mother's and Unnecessary verb
apply
families
Change noun form
family's
letter
Fix the agreement mistake
letters
return
it my new Wrong verb form
returned
address
. I ask to
Correct pronoun usage
you to
sent
Wrong verb form
send
address
my all the informations
.
Change the wording
information
pieces of information
Correct the word
Yours
Your
faithfully,
La Lisa,Correct your spelling
Yours
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structure
Try to organize your ideas more clearly with separate paragraphs for each point.
content
Ensure that each paragraph contains one main idea and a few sentences that explain or support it.
coherence
Use transitional phrases to improve the flow between sentences and paragraphs.
grammar
Check for and correct grammatical errors to enhance the clarity of your message.
task response
Make your request and the details about it (e.g., new address) clear early in the letter.
content
You effectively communicated the main issue and what you want the bank to do.
tone
Your polite tone is suitable for the context of writing to a bank.
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