Your colleague has invited you for his farewell party. You will not be able to attend the party, write a letter to your friend Explain the situation, Say why you will not be attending, Say something about the period you have worked together
Dear Ahsan,
Hope you doing well. it's been a
while
since we met each other. I received your letter and glad
to hear that Add a missing verb
am glad
you
colleagues planning to arrange Correct pronoun usage
your
farewell
party in Add an article
a farewell
the farewell
you
honour.
I wish I could join Change the pronoun
your
this
beautifull
event but I could not. I Correct your spelling
beautiful
realy
appreciate your kindness towards me but you know about my job's Correct your spelling
really
responcibilties
.
Correct your spelling
responsibilities
Unforchunately
, I have to visit Correct your spelling
Unfortunately
abrod
next month for official meetings. So I Correct your spelling
abroad
could
not be able to join you.
I feel Verb problem
will
shamed
and accept my Correct your spelling
ashamed
appolozees
for Correct your spelling
apologies
inconvenience
. But I assure you that after Add an article
the inconvenience
mey
return, I came to you and we both Correct your spelling
my
orginize
it again.
You always live in my heart, Correct your spelling
organised
Although
time
Fix the agreement mistake
times
has
changed.
I hope you will Correct subject-verb agreement
have
remeber
the days when worked Correct your spelling
remember
toghather
. That was a Correct your spelling
together
memorible
time for me and I, never forget the most Correct your spelling
memorable
fantastice
time of my life. I know, you have Correct your spelling
fantastic
same
feeling for me. After a month Change the article
the same
otr
Correct your spelling
or
two
I'll come to you till Add a comma
two,
then
enjoy yourself with your resopectable
colleagues.
Yours Sincerely,
KunwarCorrect your spelling
respectable
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Coherence & Cohesion
Make sure to proofread your letter for typos or grammatical errors, as these mistakes can distract from your message. For example, 'I realy appreciate your kindness towards me but you know about my job's responcibilties.' should be corrected for spelling and use of apostrophes.
Coherence & Cohesion
Improve your letter's logical structure by clearly separating your ideas into paragraphs with distinct purposes: one to explain your inability to attend, another to express regret and a third to reminisce about past experiences together. Ensure that each paragraph begins with a clear topic sentence.
Task Achievement
Enhance the letter by directly addressing each point from the task: clearly state the reason for your absence, express regret, and share a memorable experience or sentiment about your time working together. While you have touched on these points, providing more specific details and a clearer expression of your feelings could strengthen your response.
Task Achievement
Consider adopting a more formal tone in places where it slips, such as 'it's been a while since we met each other.' Formal correspondence benefits from consistent tone and careful choice of words, which ensures the letter maintains an appropriate level of professionalism throughout.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.