You have just finished your master’s degree and need to leave your current part-time job to search for full-time employment. Write a letter to your current employer. In your letter o● explain why you will not pursue a full-time job in his/her company o ● say why you’ve enjoyed working for him/her o ● tell him/her how much longer you will continue to work for him/her.
Dear Mr. James,
I hope you are fine. I'm writing
this
letter to express my appreciation for your support me
in Change preposition
of me
this
company as a part time
staff. As you may know, Add a hyphen
part-time
i
have Change the capitalization
I
done
my master's degree so Verb problem
completed
i
Change the capitalization
I
start
looking for a new Wrong verb form
started
oppoturnity
for my Correct your spelling
opportunity
desirable
work.
Thank Replace the word
desired
for
your offerCorrect pronoun usage
you for
a
full-time position, Change preposition
of a
and
Correct word choice
apply
i
have gained precious experience in Change the capitalization
I
hospitality
industry in your company. I would be happy to pursue my career pathway Add an article
the hospitality
due to
my main major in international business.
Although
i
have worked with your dynamic team, helpful, Change the capitalization
I
passionate
, Correct word choice
and passionate
i'm
Change the capitalization
I'm
also
willing to face the challenges if i
take part in a new job in my main industry.
I plan to hand over all my present tasks to Change the capitalization
I
whom
receive those, and Correct pronoun usage
those who
willing
to train or help them to finish on time. Add a missing verb
are willing
In addition
, i
will hand in the notice Change the capitalization
I
in
45 days in advance. Could you please accept my Change preposition
apply
last
working day on 30th June ? In the meantime, i
will help colleagues to explain and clarify my present duty till the Change the capitalization
I
last
working day.
I would appreciate your consideration.
Your
sincerely,
Emily JohnsonCorrect the word
Yours
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Coherence and Cohesion
Improve the logical structure by having a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. Ensure each paragraph flows smoothly to the next.
Coherence and Cohesion
Enhance the greeting and closing. Start the letter with a more formal greeting and end with a more appropriate closing for the context.
Coherence and Cohesion
Maintain a single idea per paragraph to ensure clarity and coherence. Use transition words to better connect paragraphs.
Task Achievement
Ensure a complete response by directly addressing all parts of the task. Make sure each bullet point is addressed thoroughly.
Task Achievement
Use a tone that is consistent and appropriate for a resignation letter. Maintain a balance between professionalism and expressing gratitude.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
