The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph presents the data about the

number

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of

museum

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visitors

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in the UK in the winter and

summer

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of 2005.

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it is clear that

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the

museum

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in the UK had the highest

number

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of

visitors

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at noon in

summer

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.

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in the afternoon to evening in winter had the lowest

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of

visitors

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as well as

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18

o’clock

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in

summer

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.

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number

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of people

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the

museum

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in the

summer

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from midnight to 11 AM.

Visitors

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had a dramatic increase from around 200 to 1,300 people, and from 11 o'clock to noon had moderately increased to the peak point of the day.

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, in the afternoon to evening at 18.00

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there was a steady decrease from 1,500 to 200

at the end

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of the day.

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, the

number

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of

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to the

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in the winter from midnight to 10

o’clock

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had

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at around 200 to 400 people after that at 11

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there was a slow decrease and a slight increase to 600 at noon which is the highest point the day.