The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.
The bar graph demonstrates the information about the percentage change in the contribution of international learners who have graduated
in
Canadian universities in 8 different provinces from 2001 to 2006
from the chart, it is noticeable that the number of international learners graduating was on the rise during the 5 year period. It Change preposition
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can be seen that in both 2001 and 2006, New Brunswick remained at the university with highest
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the highest
canadian
universities in 8 different provinces.
In 2001, on the top with more than 6% Change the capitalization
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international
students graduated Are New Brunswick, Change preposition
of international
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Nova
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and Quebec. Alberta and British Columbia came close with nearly 5 % , followed by Manitoba, Ontario, Newfoundland and Labrador at around 2.4% to 3 %
In 2006, the percentage of international Correct your spelling
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graduater
from New Correct your spelling
graduate
graduates
graduated
Brunswiek
saw a remarkable increase, perking to 12 % Correct your spelling
Brunswick
this
year, and the institution continued to hold the top spot. A considerable upward trend was also
seen in the rest while
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universities
university
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the
significant rise, rising from approximately 5% in 2001 to over 10% in just five years.Correct article usage
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