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people get Change preposition
apply
news
from the various media in
the unknown country in three different periods 2013, 2015 and 2017.
Overall
, it is clear that
television was the most popular news providing
mode of media than others.
In detail, in terms of television, it had just
below four-fifths of Add a hyphen
news-providing
Population
watched Correct article usage
the Population
then
this
was reduced considerably by around 68 percent
in 2015, Change the spelling
per cent
then
there was a slight increase in 2017, at 70 per cent. In 2013, Correct article usage
the Newspaper
Newspaper
way of Change noun form
Newspaper's
news
had.just above two-fifhs
Correct your spelling
two-fifths
while
Radio and Correct article usage
the internet
internet
were equally popular, which accounts for almost 32%. Capitalize word
Internet
Similarly
, In 2015, Radio mode of accessing news
had the same proportions in newspapers and Ratio, at 30 per cent. Surprisingly, there was a remain
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remained
news
in both periods in 2015 and 2017,.
which accounts for 30%.
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,
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In contrast
, in terms of internet
, in 2013, Add an article
the internet
this
was day
almost 31%, following the given period it Add an article
a day
was
increased slightly by Unnecessary verb
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two-fiths
, surprisingly there was a dramatic Correct your spelling
two-fifths
two-faiths
grow
in 2017, which was around 69%.Replace the word
growth
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