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You've chosen to apply for the English teacher position posted in the March issue of the publication Teaching Masters. Mr William, the director of the English programme at The Language Institute of New York, USA, put this ad, you write a letter to Mr William. In your letter: ⚫ Why are you writing this? Describe your background and experience. Tell them how to get in touch with you.

#ve #english #teacher #position #march #publication #masters #mr #william #director #programme #language #institute #york #usa #ad #background #touch
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william
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William
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 are doing well. I have
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advertisement
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 news pepper you are hiring
English
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 teacher for your institute.
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willing to join with your part of college. It is
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 opportunity
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 me . I have been
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 3 years
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of experience
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 field as a teacher.
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 I had completed 1 year internship in
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a national
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 school. I would like to apply for
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 position but I little bit confused because I have not seen any website or contact number which helps to apply. I request
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 you please demonstrate your college hiring website or any contact number.
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 it's easy to touch with you Please confirm and concrete about that thank you Your faithful Gajendra
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Greeting and Closing
Start your letter with a proper and respectful greeting. For instance, use 'Dear Mr. William,' to make it more formal and accurate.
Sentence Structure and Grammar
Pay attention to the spelling of words and the correct use of prepositions. For instance, 'I have seen the advertisement in the Express newspaper' is correct.
Logical Structure
Divide your letter into clear paragraphs: one for your introduction and purpose, one for your background and experience, and another for your questions or requests.
Writing Tone
Use a polite, professional tone throughout your letter. Avoid informal phrases and ensure the language is suitable for a job application.
Task Achievement
Clearly state your request or reason for writing at the beginning of the letter. For example, 'I am writing to express my interest in the English teacher position you advertised.'
Greeting and Closing
Close your letter with a formal sign-off, such as 'Yours sincerely,' followed by your name. This adds a level of professionalism.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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