The graph shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.

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The line graph highlights the change in

population

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between 1940 and 2000 in

Columbia

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Yamhill

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, and

Washington

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, the number of

population

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in each county has steadily increased over the

years

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. The chart outlines three

years

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, which are 1940, 1970, and 2000. In 1940,

Columbia

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had only less than 30,000 citizens, a slight difference from

Yamhill

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which reached exactly 30,000.

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Washington

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has a way higher

population

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than the other two counties, with about 75,000 people. In the next 30

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Columbia

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population

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has risen to slightly over 30,000,

whereas

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Yamhill

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's has risen to 45,000. Unlike the other two,

Washington

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population

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has increased significantly by about 50,000 so the current

population

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is over 120,000. Going into 2000, both

Columbia

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and

Yamhill

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have added up to around 40,000 people to live there. Giving them a total of citizens as high as 75,000 and 90,000.

On the other hand

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, the number of people who live in

Washington

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has doubled, becoming more than 240,000. In conclusion, the

population

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in all three counties has steadily increased over the

years

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at different rates. The county with the highest upturn rate among them is

Washington

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, which makes it the most populated county as well.

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the rest of the counties have a way lower rate

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number of

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

population change
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growth rates
economic opportunities
migration patterns
environmental conditions
rapid growth/decline
industrial development
natural disasters
governmental policies
historical data
economic conditions
environmental sustainability
technological advancements
social implications
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The graph shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.

Some people feel tha manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging.Discuss bothe views and give your opinions.

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There have been many inventions in human history, such as wheels. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

what are advantages and disadvantages of using smart devices

It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote areas with natural environments, such as the South Pole. Is this a positive or negative development?