The graph shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.
The line graph highlights the change in
population
between 1940 and 2000 in Columbia
, Yamhill
, and Washington
. Overall
, the number of population
in each county has steadily increased over the years
.
The chart outlines three years
, which are 1940, 1970, and 2000. In 1940, Columbia
had only less than 30,000 citizens, a slight difference from Yamhill
which reached exactly 30,000. In contrast
,
Washington
has a way higher population
than the other two counties, with about 75,000 people. In the next 30 years
, Columbia
's population
has risen to slightly over 30,000, whereas
Yamhill
's has risen to 45,000. Unlike the other two, Washington
's population
has increased significantly by about 50,000 so the current population
is over 120,000. Going into 2000, both Columbia
and Yamhill
have added up to around 40,000 people to live there. Giving them a total of citizens as high as 75,000 and 90,000. On the other hand
, the number of people who live in Washington
has doubled, becoming more than 240,000.
In conclusion, the population
in all three counties has steadily increased over the years
at different rates. The county with the highest upturn rate among them is Washington
, which makes it the most populated county as well. While
the rest of the counties have a way lower rate as well as
number of population
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