The chart below shows a comparision of different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005. Write at least 150 words.

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The distinction of energy sources manufactured in France in

two

distinguished years, 1995 and 2005. These figures are collated and illustrated by the pie chart.

Initally

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Initially

, gas, petro and coal are fuels that

ivolved

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involved

evolved

two

charts consumed the largest portion of both charts. The contamination of these sources in the

1995-chart

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1995 chart

was 29,63%, 29,80% and 29,27% stand for gas, coal and petro respectively.

On the other hand

, nuclear and the other powers of

two

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the two

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periods are

quiet

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opposed to each other but insignificant.

However

, these factors in

two

years are together the most trivial in

two

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the two

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charts. In the year

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apply

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1995, nuclear power accounted for 6,40% and the others were 4,90%, and in the year

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2005 nuclear had a little increase and

also

the others, 10,10% and 9,10% individually for the mentioned factors.

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