The diagram below shows the five levels of Maslow's Hierarchy of Needs. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, an make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the five levels of Maslow's Hierarchy of Needs.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, an make comparisons where relevant.
Maslow
’s Hierarchy of Needs Explained Professor of Psychology Abraham
Maslow
proposed to use a system called
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of needs it was used with others for popularity and
influence
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people which
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to
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him to bring the best
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minds of the twentieth century together.
Maslow
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animal and
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behaviour which
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him to get
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insight into
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complex and basic needs. As he was creating his method
Maslow
divided the
humans
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needs into five categories which included: love and belonging, physiological needs, safety and security, self-esteem, and self-actualization. He
then
had to propose that the needs can be ranked by how important things are or how basic it is.
Maslow
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that our own ability to have those needs would have an impact on our own psychological health.
Maslow
also
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able to meet the fundamental needs which
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towards the bottom of his pyramid. 1.Physiological Needs. These are the things that mean the most to
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to survive like staying warm,
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,
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and staying healthy. 2.Safety and security.
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level that provides us with safe and secure surroundings for
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,
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, and other people. 3.Love and belonging. Once you have a safe and secure
then
you can focus on being
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other people in your life. 4. Self-esteem
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should be at the top of your own hierarchy our own feelings are the ones that make
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good about ourselves. 5. Self-actualization.
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top of your pyramid where you can express who you really are and achieve all of your goals.
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